Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,581 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Spirit In New Words - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Spirit in new words

You need to be young
And in position to sing
And share the grief
Even for brief

When old poets
Remain quiet
Raise no voice
The young have no choice

They got to jump in fray
Try to swing the way
And maneuver the things in favor
With flower’s flavor

Yes, it is god’s gift
With relevant shift
In attitude and stand
We fully understand

0the expression matters
And offers
Real spirit in words
That shall make us to look forward

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Comments about Spirit In New Words by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/27/2015 9:54:00 PM)


    0the expression matters
    And offers
    Real spirit in words
    That shall make us to look forward Beautiful poetic lines, thanks for sharing
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/27/2015 9:14:00 PM)


    Doug Groberg Very nice. As I was finishing this poem last night, I though maybe I would write a companion poem called Old Poets. Have to give it some thought. Thank you for sharing Hasmukh.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/27/2015 9:12:00 PM)


    welcome Munez Capas
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/27/2015 9:11:00 PM)


    welcome Nella Loagnod likes this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/27/2015 8:37:00 PM)


    0ther expression matters
    And offers
    Real spirit in words
    That shall make us to look forward
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/27/2015 8:36:00 PM)


    0ther expression matters
    And offers
    Real spirit in words
    That shall make us to look forward
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2015



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