Buds blossom birds sing
beaches swell with libido
seniors walk in park.
Another lovely Spring poem and Haiku too. Buds, blossoms, birds are all part of this celebration. A lovely fresh poem for all to enjoy. Karin Anderson
beaches swell with libido- -love love love that line, it sits in the middle of your haiku like a jewel
Very skillfully written to receive a bit of an outcry in the comments Jim. Do you know, I think you are pretty much right and I love every single word you have placed as each one plays such an important part in your masterpiece. 10 Karin Anderson
Seniors sometimes go to the beach, too, Jim... with their libido.... possibly with their Viagra too [I'm not at that stage yet - so please do not consider me an authoritative source on this! ] Difficult in Houston, the beach, I grant you! Like the contradiction/implication between the second and third lines! From the title, even before seeing the stanza arrive, I couldn't stop hearing an old Bristish crooner called 'Max Bygraves' singing his signature tune with a slightly jewish 'lilt' to it: 'When it's Spring again, I'll sing again.... Tulips from Amsterdam...', made just slightly more unsettling by the fact he moved in not a few hundred yards from where I used to live in Bournemouth, England! Tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The charm of spring is ageless. Lovely piece. Not a word wasted. 10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra