Spring Season Poem by Lawrence Hiung

Spring Season

Rating: 5.0


Look at this world
As it smiles like a baby,
Reaching for treasures
That nature revives.

This is the time
that brings joy beyond measure,
Sweet as the memories
that fashion our lives.

Listen for sounds
that were frozen in winter,
Whispering soft
As a kiss on your hair.

Nature's reborn
And her warmth brings such pleasure,
sweet as the memories
That we used to share.

Feel the new sun
And the breeze he created.
Feel the wet earth
As it swallows the snow.

Pause to decipher
A message unstated,
Sweet as the memories
Of days long ago.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 23 March 2012

A beautiful, inspirational poem, sharing revelations of such a pleasant and welcoming season. I love it.

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Lawrence H 23 March 2012

Reflection Note: This poem described about beginning of spring season. The poet used five senses in the poem (e.g. see, hear, feel) Other words used for Spring; new sun, nature’s reborn, wet earth. The mood in the poem created by the poet was pondering the new spring season. Words/ phrases used to evoke the reader’s feeling is “sweet as the memories”

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