Star Light Star Bright Comments

i've seen those stars....i have my own share of sad starry poems (Starry Night, Dead Stars)

what a lovely piece..great flow of beautiful words... Love, Meggie

I liked the turn in this flowing poem Indira although I was unhappy for you. Stars represent romance and new beginnings, but like life itself, they can't be happy all the time, nor can you! Great writing as always. 10 Karin

i dislove into the dark spaces you traverse before you shine nice. shan

phew! it left me breathless. literally. awesome. thank you very much, ma'am.

Great visual imagery, and a nice take on something we can all identify with. We haven't the time to just enjoy what nature and the universe has to offer us each day. If we did stop for a moment to do so, our lives would be much richer. A lovely poem with a powerful message. Linda :)

'spent and tired' night after night i dissolve into the dark spaces you traverse before you shine Lovely piece Indira...10