Still I'm Fine Poem by Sheikh Shadi Marjan

Still I'm Fine

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A bright ruby living in the middle finger,
Its color is fades today.

Spent the whole night,
To make the side around

Many thoughts moving on my head
There is no progress
Steady and good time far away
Still I'm fine
Trying to be good

Still I'm Fine
Thursday, June 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: abstract,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bipasha D 02 August 2018

Good job! This spirit keeps us going: There is no progress Steady and good time far away Still I'm fine Trying to be good

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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 02 August 2018

Thank you so much.. Dear poet

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2018

Life! ! With many thoughts! Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 05 July 2018

Still I'm fine / Trying to be good~~~~ That may be the most heroic words in history. Not something the brave soldier would say., but the man struggling through life to feed and guide and guard his family might say it and in saying it, he is a good and steadfast man. Well done.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 June 2018

Still I'm fine Trying to be good........ inspite of all that is negative in life, living with the thought i am fine, i go forward....... very positve thought dear poet. thank u. tony

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Asif Mahfuj 28 June 2018

Heart touched, Excellent poetry. Best Wishes for you

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