MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Stop Opiumed By Opinions Of Others [so4] ~

~ Stop Opiumed by Opinions Of Others [SO4] ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
26 July 26,2010

I’m in my own I
Phew whew scrap trash
Mega bytes of biblios audios visuals
Pouring every millisecond
From all comers luring
Strange and uncalled for
And unforced for!

Why be prey to that?
As I wish I’ll be
Sociable but
Why be Socialite? ~ Lol!

Why elude equate in
Plus minuses of calories
Curves crevices pop outs
Vital stat to satiate others’
My oomph appeal by
Lingerie lulu ~ sucks up ~ lololuuud?

Socialites personages
Of Page Three
Party animals nocturnals
Stay boozed binged in
Satiating their un-fillable bulimia
For libido lucre gloss glitter!

I’m no petite Page Three
But nonpareil Page A~One
I’m happy with e’er full
Innate richness of my
Ace alto audio of abode ~
Stop Opiumed by Opinions Of Others.

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Glossary with humility I’m giving what I tried to express:
Alto ~ The pitch range of the lowest female voice

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 26, 2010

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  • Bachha Chakravorty (4/18/2012 1:02:00 PM)

    Bubbling effervescent sparkling self confidence

    I agree with Gloss Glitter very aptly commented

    The salivating call of Glossy Life....indeed to shun...Poet clearly showed the happiness in '...But nonpareil Page A~One...'

    Thanks for sharing
    Ten+

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  • Shanti Gloss Bagchi Glitter (4/17/2012 1:40:00 PM)

    Flamboyant and Undaunted Self Confidence...very nicely crafted Poet Ms. Nivedita is much conscious of gender- bias and she accordingly spoke...

    Women's lib doesn't mean 'want it and have it by any and all menace' as happens in High Society...better to be down to earth with one's own identity

    Thanks for sharing 10++

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  • Shanti Gloss Bagchi Glitter (4/17/2012 1:39:00 PM)

    Flamboyant and Undaunted Self Confidence...very nicely crafted Poet Ms. Nivedita is much conscious of gender- bias and she accordingly spoke...

    Women's lib doesn't mean 'want it and have it by any and all menace' as happens in High Society...better to be down to earth with one's own identity

    Thanks for sharing 10++

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  • Amitabha Bagchi (4/12/2012 12:31:00 PM)

    Simply amazing... 'glossy-life' many salivate for...here poet clearly turned down the calorie to zero....indeed...party animals are lookin' for stale overused cliched life...only to aggravate one's orgy alas its never satisfied...dooms into bloom thanks for sharing 10++

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  • Amitabha Bagchi (4/12/2012 12:31:00 PM)

    Simply amazing... 'glossy-life'...many salivate for...here poet clearly turned down the calorie to zero....indeed...party animals are lookin' for stale overused cliched life...only to aggravate one's orgy alas its never satisfied...dooms into gloom thanks for sharing 10++

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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (11/14/2010 8:28:00 PM)

    Once again you are unique in your presentation. I liked the poem very much.

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (9/4/2010 2:26:00 AM)

    I am 100% your side in this matter!

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  • Lynn Glover (8/8/2010 12:16:00 PM)

    A good poem Niv, I enjoyed the read. Some portions I didn't understand, but after a couple of reads it came to me. Good work.

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  • Gregory Pierre-jeromeGregory Pierre-jerome (8/5/2010 4:53:00 PM)

    PROVERBS 8
    17I love them that love me; and those that seek me early shall find me.

    18Riches and honour are with me; yea, durable riches and righteousness.

    19My fruit is better than gold, yea, than fine gold; and my revenue than choice silver.

    20I lead in the way of righteousness, in the midst of the paths of judgment:

    21That I may cause those that love me to inherit substance; and I will fill their treasures.

    22The LORD possessed me in the beginning of his way, before his works of old.

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  • Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty (8/5/2010 6:55:00 AM)

    I'M IN MY OWN I
    I'M IN MY OWN I
    I'M IN MY OWN I

    Very hard to keep this strength forever. But who can, is genius. All your realizations, one kind of confession to one and strict self. Perhaps its the darks of the time to fight a poet for. Try to achieve the goal. Our wishes with you.

    Well-written with megabytes of anti waves and lingerie. In another sense the total poetry has been an ideal writing of socialite literature and standing against the sociable life of existing time.

    Good craft undoubtedly and inspiring writing style of the time.

    Regards,
    10+++
    pranab

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  • Rediffusion [bapi] Effusion [chakravorty] (8/4/2010 1:47:00 PM)

    Very Bold Poetry …confidence spilling straight phewing to Page Three …as all salivate for to be copy cat of celebs…

    ‘I’m no petite Page Three
    But nonpareil Page A~One
    I’m happy with e’er full
    Innate richness of my
    Ace alto audio of abode ~
    Stop Opiumed by Opinions Of Others.’ ~ These lines explicitly speak of futility of being Page Three …to be in Page A~one…opposite of in vogue…full of grit…
    10+++

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (8/4/2010 1:35:00 PM)

    wonderful poem, Niv...your ideas are very well expressed here

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  • Carol Gall (8/3/2010 12:25:00 PM)

    niv you are one amazing poet

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  • Chulsoo Kim (8/2/2010 5:22:00 AM)

    getting visa from others to get together makes a person up for sharing the domain of cutting fruit imagination and down for aparting not to serve on their good and better feelings. Fruit can be born after flower falls down.

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  • Gregory Pierre-jeromeGregory Pierre-jerome (7/29/2010 10:08:00 PM)

    this is an interesting write carries a lot of melody in fact...great

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (7/28/2010 5:35:00 AM)

    Its better that you cut down your calories, look petite and enjoy your life.

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  • C N Prem KumarC N Prem Kumar (7/26/2010 11:05:00 AM)

    Stunning name of the poem and the different formating give a perfect harmony of words. Excellent Nivedita.

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