MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.


~ Store In Soul Slot ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

KEEP IN SOUL SLOT
Ms. Nivedita
UK
December 14th 2009.

Tip top
Rose pot
Love dot
Romance spot.

Break all block
In heart lock.

I’m caught
Coalesce n’ clot
Take snap shot
Lo get you got.

As an ought
Swap all allot
Store in soul slot
Love you lot
I’m hot shot
Forget me not.

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Comments about ~ Store In Soul Slot ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • (10/8/2011 7:23:00 AM)


    Heyy, i Love the way you described your poem in a very detailed way, sorry i couldn't reply earlier as i didn't have time to go on the computer
    PS.
    Keep up the good work, n Write till you dropp ;)
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  • (12/1/2010 4:49:00 PM)


    I definately won't forget you. (Report) Reply

  • (11/20/2010 1:20:00 PM)


    A great work! ! ! You have fabulous technique of expressing hidden emotions. keep it up. God bless you.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Miroslava Odalovic (10/16/2010 1:22:00 AM)


    Sounds like tip toeing the soul of love. Very nice :) (Report) Reply

  • (10/6/2010 10:50:00 PM)


    Poetry and music as one. So cleverly done and whimsical. It's very uplifting and great placement of words. Last line 'I'm hot shot, forget me not' great way to end it. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (8/3/2010 9:22:00 PM)


    I'm hot shot, forget me not! ! wow...incredible, its not just that its poetry, it is also, words to live by everyday! Good job. totally love this poem (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2010 9:31:00 AM)


    I am caught in a snap shot of soul slot. The hot shot on the romance spot has caused a heart lock. (Report) Reply

  • (6/10/2010 4:30:00 PM)


    How romantic! 'I've stored all the beautiful rhyming words in my 'soul Slot' Good job Niv a 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (6/8/2010 8:21:00 AM)


    Wow! ! Excellent emotional rhyming…

    ‘I’m caught/Coalesce n’ clot’ …nice metaphor ‘clot’ and ‘coalescing’ 14

    Yeah such a lover must be in ‘Soul Slot’…beaus are desperate to get such lolol
    10++
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  • (6/8/2010 3:32:00 AM)


    First I thank Sr. Poet Hasmukh Amathalal for a equally comment-poetry…I enjoyed it much and

    Hello Dear Niv you’re already in stored in Soul Slot…its neat and nifty with inter play of oozing emotion and wording…enjoyed much
    10+
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  • (6/7/2010 12:03:00 AM)


    To Hon’ble Sr.Poet Hasmukh-ji.
    My poetry feeling greatly smitten aflamed and blooming in fervent flutter by your hued chromatic poetic additives …feeling levitation of joy and rejoice and thanks Sir ‘Smiling-Face’ Hasmukh-ji... lolol]
    Regards
    niv

    Copy to
    To Hon’ble Sr.Poet Hasmukh-ji.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/6/2010 8:52:00 PM)


    As an ought
    Swap all allot
    Store in soul slot
    Love you lot
    I’m hot shot
    Forget me not........nicely composed and freely exposed with honet intention.. i liked its contents with utmost desire...niv smile at....10

    never to forget but never to let
    If it is plain truth and fact
    i must cautiously behave and act
    to fall in but not to react

    you may remain in my house slot
    there is reservation in holy plot
    i was living like barren land
    To make it greener you extended hand

    You may remain forever hot
    I am also boiling water in pot
    It may be good if acted on spot
    Anxiety may end with enjoyment lot

    come and stay as much as you can
    I shall remain always your fan
    See to it that it moves like train
    I must get the seat without any rain

    You may shower with all your sweats
    It may also result in dry land to wet
    What may emerge from it as new creation
    It won't remain there as mere recreation......
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  • (5/30/2010 2:49:00 PM)


    ‘Lo get you got.’

    We too Ma’am…lolol

    Excellent rhyming type...laconic…dancing bee without sting but to be binged
    10+++
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  • (5/30/2010 12:34:00 PM)


    As an ought
    Swap all allot
    Store in soul slot
    Love you lot
    I’m hot shot
    Forget me not.

    sure... its like you said so. impressive and heart knocking way is your thoughtful poetry
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  • (5/13/2010 9:22:00 PM)


    I love the love lock part the expresses the build up of romance in this poem. Very good write. Lynn a ten (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2010 11:02:00 AM)


    Like tic-tac …lick lap …
    Yeah store in soul slot with ‘Swap all allot’
    Thanks for such a romantic poem
    10++
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  • (1/2/2010 9:25:00 AM)


    Short but expressive poem.

    ‘…Break all block // In heart lock…’

    Very much appealing and styled: Chic and Chichi.
    AB
    LONDON
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  • (12/29/2009 12:14:00 PM)


    Like ‘ticktack’ poem is carrying us forward but it is LOVE WATCH [Machine and Look attentively] (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2009 10:48:00 AM)


    Enjoyed the read. Short lines with a smiling theme. (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 11:43:00 AM)


    Like chick…sleek...click...pluck… pick…tick…
    Enjoyed and thanks for sharing…
    10+
    Dr. V
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 13, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010


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