Strange Are Ways Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Strange Are Ways

Rating: 5.0


Strange are the ways human beings prefer
Adopt double standard and willingly offer
All sorts of arguments to suit guilty mind
Yet claim morality and show to be kind

She is waiting daily for sunrise
Much awaited in store for surprise
She has her own ambition with love triangle
But no regret for lost love and having troubles

"Jealousy" is eating you away
She found nice way to cover and throw me away
As dear friend this was what I could offer
Even though much to her disliking and to differ

I begged to take leave from her and part
I thought it was company with bad start
Here was a well known personality I had opted for
But soon it was on brink and turning sour

I was zealous to defend her from misconception
She was dragged in for dreamy situation
I felt it unnecessary and preferred isolation
It was coming to an end of a beautiful relation

She was blinded by fancy ideas and odd conception
Someone had reminded her of lost relation
Now he had apologized and regretted the decision
This was the sentimental error she was flowing in with confusion

I can do no more but watch from across the fence
She has remained all the time in pain and tense
Even though I believed it was not correct and senseless
She had all the satisfaction to narrate on the face

I shall go by her wish
As no one knows how it may turn to finish
But surely it may not be pleasant
As in past we have witnessed many such instants

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2012

Strange are the ways human beings prefer Adopt double standard and willingly offer All sorts of arguments to suit guilty mind Yet claim morality and show to be kind

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 26 March 2012

The first verse really shows great emotion and touches on human selfishness....but i must say that the remaining verse sound a bit different from the first....you are talking of a girl who you loved but broke your heart or sumthing...the rhyming is nice but the first and the rest seem quite contrasting....+

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2012

4 hours ago « Delete » GINA Why you have me so dizzy with this nonsense at yours? ? ? I miss him! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .... this I feel.. this I know.. this I write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's clear? ?

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Kumar Parashar 25 March 2012

nice one......simple idea and beautiful description... way to go

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2012

Re: Strange are ways (Score: 1) by ossy on Sunday, March 25,2012 (15: 19: 50) Keeping up with such steady rhyming and a good blending write is something poetic mastery could afford. Its a wonderful write you have here my friend and I like it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2012

Jugnu She seems to be an unstable weak personality, she should better be forgotten and left to her conditions, as unpleasant endings are always unwelcomed. Nice write, Sir!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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