Strange Articles Poem by Lauren Michaels

Strange Articles



And if the frost makes the flower
Then it blooms unbidden
And spills out
All terrible colour
Blossomed from my mouth

Something stirs with its birth
Or stunted dormancy
And she said it right.
Its stirring draws a knell
'Somebodys done for'

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Goldy Locks 27 October 2007

like an omen. the flower plays an omen. scholarly use of `knell.' definitely inspiring work, Lauren. i rather like (if i could make a change) : And if the frost makes the flower / Then it blooms forbidden. best care, sjg

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Marc Mannheimer 25 October 2007

That was very good. The last line, definitely disturbing

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