Strange Thought Poem by Wild Grass Cad

Strange Thought

Rating: 4.5


How to move when u r stuck
How to step forward if ur feet are chained in the ground
Chained by uncertainties
The courageous heart is nowhere to find
The empty mind not of ignorance but innocence
Weighing the justice of world and God
I may be caged by darkness of fear
I may be bound to suffer in hill
I may be distant from truth
I may be hurt by an invisible hand
Created by my cruel mind
The spirit in me tells me to stop
The longing of help is now lost in track
The path of just was twisted by bliss
The kind and wicked are here inside.

Friday, September 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: random thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 19 March 2018

your poet name drew me in. i would not use maybe as in I maybe bound to suffer hill. i'd use I may be... or I maybe am bound... and did you mean hill or ill? i especially enjoyed the first six lines of the poem. bri ;)

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Wild Grass Cad 16 April 2018

Yeah dat shoukdnbe mAy be.. Ive noticed that before but didnt have time to edit.. Lol.. Its reay hill. :) thanks for commenting. I appreciate it so so much

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Cherry. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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