Strong And Not Weak Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Strong And Not Weak

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Work must start with strong resolve
The problem must be over and solved
It should never stop in between
The result will be immediately seen

What makes task easy and smooth?
When you put everything through nail and tooth
It may pave the way for success
When you find master key with access

Through study may make it still easy
When you may involve more to get busy?
It has to make the way for further inroad
Even if it is laden with lots of efforts and load

Fortune may smile with passage of time
The success story may appear many times
Life may become embodiment of ladder
You may go on with success as leader

The honesty and dedication plays great part
Suddenly you don't get it with little start
It has to be slow and steady
But you must always be alert and ready

Let your name be aligned with future
As you have made it amply clear
Success means life that speaks
You are taken as strong and not weak

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 August 2012

Work must start with strong resolve The problem must be over and solved

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 August 2012

A wonderful message in this poem, particularly liked this part- Life may become embodiment of ladder You may go on with success as leader The honesty and dedication plays great part Suddenly you don’t get it with little start It has to be slow and steady Thanks for sharing. Hema Ravi, Chennai Aug 18,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 August 2012

Dear Sir, A fine poem on being 'Strong and not Weak'. If our mindsest is clear and, not wavering, with pragmatic approach to problems, the question of being 'weak' would not arise. And we would 'be as strong as an ox' (an idiom) to mean we would be very strong. Thereby, noticeable aspects of success we would find; and, in the end, we would make a success of our effort. With regards, K. Sadasivan, Chennai Aug 18,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

nice Scott Hirsch21 minutes ago nice Comment 0 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

Barbara Lopez17 minutes ago well written and nice concept

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Ken E Hall 16 August 2012

Work must start with strong resolve...indeed it must and the poem goes on with excellent advice it is a shadow of my own life...very nice to read for the young starting out...regards

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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