Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 383,068 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Strong And Not Weak - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Work must start with strong resolve
The problem must be over and solved
It should never stop in between
The result will be immediately seen

What makes task easy and smooth?
When you put everything through nail and tooth
It may pave the way for success
When you find master key with access

Through study may make it still easy
When you may involve more to get busy?
It has to make the way for further inroad
Even if it is laden with lots of efforts and load

Fortune may smile with passage of time
The success story may appear many times
Life may become embodiment of ladder
You may go on with success as leader

The honesty and dedication plays great part
Suddenly you don't get it with little start
It has to be slow and steady
But you must always be alert and ready

Let your name be aligned with future
As you have made it amply clear
Success means life that speaks
You are taken as strong and not weak


Comments about Strong And Not Weak by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2012 6:11:00 PM)


    A wonderful message in this poem, particularly liked this part-
    Life may become embodiment of ladder
    You may go on with success as leader
    The honesty and dedication plays great part
    Suddenly you don’t get it with little start
    It has to be slow and steady
    Thanks for sharing.


    Hema Ravi, Chennai
    Aug 18,2012
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2012 6:11:00 PM)


    Dear Sir, A fine poem on being 'Strong and not Weak'. If our mindsest is clear and, not wavering, with pragmatic approach to problems, the question of being 'weak' would not arise. And we would 'be as strong as an ox' (an idiom) to mean we would be very strong. Thereby, noticeable aspects of success we would find; and, in the end, we would make a success of our effort. With regards,



    K. Sadasivan, Chennai
    Aug 18,2012
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2012 12:10:00 AM)


    nice


    Scott Hirsch21 minutes ago
    nice
    Comment 0
    nice
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2012 12:09:00 AM)


    Barbara Lopez17 minutes ago
    well written and nice concept
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  • (8/16/2012 11:53:00 PM)


    Work must start with strong resolve...indeed it must and the poem goes on with excellent advice it is a shadow of my own life...very nice to read for the young starting out...regards (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/16/2012 11:41:00 PM)


    Work must start with strong resolve
    The problem must be over and solved
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 17, 2012


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