Strong Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Strong Relation

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I do not know about me
As I am really not free
Totally caged in one space
Where I think for self and see the face

It may be case for others
Ready for everything to share
Take the burden on shoulder
And remain firmly together

I can claim no different
I can only remain present
In day to day life
To face the strife

Many advocate
And relate
About nothingness
Yet life has smiling face

What is so special about journey?
Why do we seek blessings from almighty?
It is just ray of hope
That prevents you from going flop

I blame only situation
And honor the institution
We are no exception
But guided by strong relation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

Very good Michael Robinson2 hours ago Excellent poem but could do with a touch up in terms of syntax Comment +1 yes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

Nicole Berrong2 hours ago keep following your heart

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

I do not know about me As I am really not free

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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