Stupid Cupid Poem by Bridgid Patrick
Stupid Cupid
All the love that history knows,
Is said to be in every rose
Yet all that could be found in two,
Is less than what i feel for you
I thought love was just a mirage of the mind,
Its fake, an illusion, impossible to find
But the day i met you i began to see
Love is real and exists in me.
'Love is something that can't be described.
Like the look of a rose,
The smell of the rain,
Or the feeling of forever'
Beautiful poem bridget, your right, love cant be described it has to be felt by the heart to be understood. excellent poem! ! angel
I agree with you Bridgid, you just can't describe the feeling........you have to experience it. Nice poem. Sincerely, Mary
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 11:22:37 PM # 1.0.0.1119
the motif and the ideas in this poem are romantic and well thought out. I would have found this poem more powerful if I knew of a convincing argument that a single rose containing all the love that history knows. I have never heard this idea. The rhythm, rhyme and meter of the poem was very well done. But the imagery is hard to believe because often people give a dozen roses.. let alone 2 roses. This problem could be fixed by changing the opening 2 lines into a hypothetical. i.e. 'even if all the love could be in a single rose...' etc. well.. just ideas.. cheers!