Suburban Soul In The Upstream Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Suburban Soul In The Upstream

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The dark river is deep like life
And of course he cannot swim well.
Shore is very far like heaven
And she waves her red handkerchief.
Love is luminous like a shooting star
But he gets cramps thinking of the challenge distance.

*To all the eternal lovers where they float in the sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 21 March 2009

You express the struggle of star-crossed lovers with great eloquence in this beautiful poem. I'm sure Romeo and Juliet would enjoy reading this poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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