Ravi Sathasivam


Such A Feeling In My Mind...... - Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

Such a feeling in my mind
When you say I am your love
I felt this world has belonged to me
I love you today as I will tomorrow
So many days come and gone
Will any day be good without your love
Oh my love, you are the star that guides my life
I will hold you in my heart till my end
Everything in you is so immense and beautiful
I promise you now, I will give all I have
It's not who you are to the world but it's who you are to me
Loving you is something I can not explain
But my words can tell you how much you mean to me
No matter where ever I am but my love never dies for you


Comments about Such A Feeling In My Mind...... by Ravi Sathasivam

  • (11/29/2009 10:41:00 AM)

    No matter where ever I am but my love never dies for you

    a very beautiful lyrical poem, the ideas are well expressed...

    10++++++++++
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  • (11/24/2009 4:19:00 PM)

    well written well expressed (Report)Reply

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  • (11/24/2009 11:11:00 AM)

    i don't know if you mean something by(a feelings) , but (a) never comes after it a plural...if you don't mean something by breaking this rule.
    but the poem is wonderful just don't stop writing....great work :) i give it 10.
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  • Kesav Easwaran (11/24/2009 6:47:00 AM)

    good work...liked the affection love and sincerity the poem carries inside...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (11/24/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    nice poem again, but i felt its like the continuation of the poem somewhere of my love.... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 4, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 22, 2011


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