Suddenly Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Suddenly

Rating: 5.0


dark clouds fiery
mar the sun
and the sky,
this is Kerala.
It seemed
rains are here,
but alas!
a gust of wind
washes
the clouds away.
a breeze cool
rainsoaked
saunters in.
it has rained
cats and dogs
elsewhere.

Wednesday, June 21, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: cats,clouds,dogs,rain,rains
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is Kerala
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 June 2023

Nature is mysterious and wonderful. Beautiful poem!

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Who can fathom the mystery of nature?

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I have written "a gust of wind /washes /the clouds away." I did not write "a gust of wind / chases /the clouds away." Deliberately. Hope my fellow poets understand

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Nabakishore Dash 22 June 2023

Guest of wind always sways away rain to some other area.Enjoyed your depiction of rain saunter

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May I invite you to visit Kerala?

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Windswept clouds take your rains away. Is it the wind's vagabond nature (in Sanskrit wind is called ‘Anila' meaning the one that does not stay at one place)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 June 2023

I cite your last three lines: It has rained cats and dogs elsewhere but not in Kerala! Sweetest created, excellenly worded. Home Sweet Home, Your Kerala, the most beautiful. TOP Marks

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Try to visit Kerala at least once, if you have not yet

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Thank you, Sylvia. Monsoons make Kerala

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While during the monsoons, it rains cats and dogs all over kerala, the gods own country, the pre-monsoon showers might play hide and seek..

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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