Sue My Heart Poem by kibrom habtu

Sue My Heart

Rating: 4.8


Beneath the somber deeds of thought
I obstinated my self and vend my heart
Before my hands reached to you in the night to call
My eyes saw thy serene joy emptying my soul
My ears heard thy sweet judgment provoking the pieces of my heart….unbending
My knees felt the long distance while the grievous justice remains forgotten
And I sat
Am I to thee a fortunate lover?
Though I was caught by love and I went undercover

Beneath the moment of being a lad
I betrayed life that has never been planned
I searched my heart and found nothing to remember
Shall I summon my self to thee and thrice times must I beseech or surrender

Beneath the somber deeds of thought
I obstinated my self and vend my heart
Beneath the moment of being a lad
I betrayed life that has never been planed
And there I was….broken hearted, longing to search for thee along the river Nile
But you sued my heart with thy wistful smile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

good poem it shows ur true thoughts and fellings

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Lady Grace 10 January 2011

very good and it has a style...

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Subbaraman N V 09 January 2011

Very nice! Highly philosophical!

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Mary Louise Mann Gabumpa 09 January 2011

nice poem... a poem that is written from the heart, really thought of and especially just freshly felt is incomparable...

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kunjubi Varghese 08 January 2011

Romantic...Sentimental...Written with an urge in the heart.. very good. Keep the spirit flowing like this. Love is eternal..

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Dagimawi Tujuba 15 May 2011

good piece brother! i really loved it.

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Indira Babbellapati 26 January 2011

sewing the heart is a wonderful expression...

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Jenny Gordon 22 January 2011

I LIKE this! It is a delightful, fascinating poetic depiction of falling in love. Beautiful! I love especially the concluding line about her wistful smile....saving you by sueing your heart? The entire description of falling in love, as you've thus painted it, is very interesting and I quite enjoyed it.

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Henry Brown 16 January 2011

A deep thoughtful piece that touches the soul

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Henry Brown 16 January 2011

A deep thoughtful piece that touches the soul

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