Undo This Moment

Rating: 4.8
my sweet, my soul, my heart
unstressed my mind, uncover my eyes
unloved my body, my silence cries
unfreeze my hands, unquestioned my heart
unfold my tongue, lets not depart.
unwise your self from selfishness
unlock the secret of beauty and be relentless
but the entire hope disappears
while your hand touches softness
guarding heart and showing kindness
i found my self within thy eye
empty and lost
it no longer interest me
this grace this beauty
upon thy flesh, against thy cheek
holding hand and hand
my tears are falling upon me
and so fare well my love
I'm gone away
Tuesday, July 27, 2010
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 26 September 2014
A powerful piece well penned. I guess walking away is a sensible option whenever there is tragedy in the bliss of love. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.10 marks for you. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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Vinod Kumar 25 August 2011
Beauty of the beloved`s smile with the beautiful landscape and cool....
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Elizabeth Mpanga 26 April 2011
this poem is packed with so much hurt! i can feel the pain of lose from your words. LOVE is a very starnge emotion. i love this. keep writing. you are so good
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Redd Juceekittee 10 January 2011
We create our own world. So, if you say that it is, it is. If you say 'I want this to have a positive outcome' then putting that type of energy out there draws in positive energy that equates to a more pleasant experience. Doom and gloom brings just that...Doom and gloom
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The Enigma 02 December 2010
its like i always say verry good but i dont know what to say about this one
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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 December 2010
You will learn from your past.
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