Suggest A Title (I Can't Decide) Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Suggest A Title (I Can't Decide)

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I've been going to a psychiatrist
But I don't think I'll go back anymore.
I've always thought I was indecisive
And now, after all that, I'm not so sure.

Suggest A Title (I Can't Decide)
Sunday, December 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: health,humor,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
25 December 2016

I haven't really been going to a psychiatrist. Just turning an old joke into a poem.

It is true, however, that I couldn't decide on a good title, so I am inviting my readers to suggest a title.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 28 December 2016

Indecisiveness would work or Psychosomatic Vacillation.

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Kim Barney 02 February 2024

Thanks, Spock. I can't decide if I like either of those.

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Wes Vogler 28 December 2016

I would think not being so sure of indecisiveness would be comforting If it is a title for the poem you want I would suggest positive uncertainty (had a nice time trying to spell indecisiveness.. consider it a public service)

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Kim Barney 02 February 2024

Thanks for the suggestions, Wes. It sure is quiet around here since you left.

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