I Don't Care Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

I Don't Care

Rating: 4.9

My head is bald,
but I don't care.
I'm not so tall,
but I don't care.

I'm overworked
and underpaid.
It's been ten years
since I got

sick, and my boss says
'That don't count a lick! '

I'm disapproved,
have all that's bad
and nothing good.

I am so ugly
that I find
that parents shove
their kids behind
their backs to keep
me from shocking
them to sleep.

And then those parents
stand and stare
but I don't care.

I Don't Care
Friday, February 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: humor
written and submitted 27 Feb 2015 (picture did not load)

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Amitava Sur 20 April 2015

Liked this carefully caring less write along with an ugly picture on it's height.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 17 May 2015

Haha carefree very nice poem very good attitude there are not so important things that we should disregard and appreciate beauty instead.

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John Carter Brown 10 March 2024

Well, that settles that then.

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Faith Brigham 12 February 2024

Enjoyed your poem very much. Thanks for the chuckle. This poem is very cleverly composed and has a wonderful flow to it.

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Kim Barney 12 February 2024

Faith, thank you very much for commenting on this old poem of mine. I will come and read some of yours.

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Koffi Sossou 08 September 2023

I wish we could have a better word where all will be equal no matter what and have justice as the king.

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Congratulations, dear poet. This poem is ranked @#90 in the list of Best Poems of Members

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Kim Barney 04 July 2023

And yesterday it was still on the list at #87, but today the list has changed drastically, and it is gone!

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Kim Barney 29 June 2023

And then yesterday it moved up to #85, but today has dropped to #96. Thanks for noticing, Unni ji.

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Nice poem. Enjoyed the humour.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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