Suicide 2 Poem by Leah Nunya

Suicide 2

Rating: 4.8


Suicide is scarlet
It smells like hot running water
It tastes like his last goodbye kiss

It sounds like those silent blades sliding across her wrist
It feels like its finally over
It looks like the open lifeless eyes of a freind daughter girlfreind and life changer.
Suicide is locking you emotions up inside of you, until your gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vallerie Lobell 09 November 2007

I find suicide poems the hardest to comment on of all subjects never kowing what is poetic expression and what is truth...this is well written....been there...thanks for sharing...let this site be your outlet...welcome to P.H and best wishes...hang in there...Vallerie

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