Suicide Poem by Brooklyn Sorrow

Suicide

Rating: 5.0


Suicide.
So simple.

Suicide.
To good to pass up.

Suicide.
Small bottle of poison.
Poison wine.

Suicide.
Bleed.
Cut.

Put me to rest.
Sweet suicide.

Often thought about.
I have to much despair.

Let me see them again.

Suicide.
The word in my head.
Suicide.
My only escape.
Suicide.
The word many dread.

This word,
My favorite.
So many options...

For Suicide...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elizabeth England 06 December 2009

THIS IS NEVER THE ANSWER! ! ! ! i know life seems rough sometimes but giving up and taking the easy way out isnt the right thing to do. you dont have to listen to me, i mean im just some girl on the internet that you dont even know but im always here in you want to talk about ANYTHING. feel free to send me a message.

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John Knight 29 November 2009

Hi Brooke - You can't be serious! The problem is - if you have the courage - suicide is easy. I have stood at the top of the Eiffel Tower and on the edge of the Niagara Falls all one had to do was JUMP! We have all contemplted it at sometime - 'Suicide so simple - Put me to rest - Sweet suicide'. Suicide is always linked to despair - but it is an escape - an easy way out 'Suicide - My favorite word - So many options - For suicide. In my experience Brooke - of dealing with failed suicides - it is often just a 'Cri de Coeur' the need for a little TLC. We love your poems B - they take us to the brink - but we love you as well and we are always there for you should you need us. Thsi is well structured and has great pathos and great flow - I scoe it TEN. Love you in Poetry - JOHN. .

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Jennifer Ottinger 29 November 2009

This seems to speak up a lot, after reading your biography as well, it seems to hint other things. Suicide can be written about but not acted upon, no one deserves to fall to themselves, if that makes sense. I can relate. Glad to have this poem contributed here.

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a a 29 November 2009

Dont do it! ! ! ! Lol jk, very nice touch of cynicism, u make it sound so tempting...

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a a 29 November 2009

Dont do it! ! ! ! Lol jk, very nice touch of cynicism, u make it sound so tempting...

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