Suicide Poem by Taylor Winegar
Suicide
on the verge
you are
to show yourself
even though i fight through my willingness and fight
you are stronger
afraid am i not
for i know i will loose
but i still put up fight
but only for show
to show everything is fine
then only will i let you win
but with your win comes a price
my life
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4/25/2024 4:50:54 AM # 1.0.0.1119
No - I do not think this will do at all. It is not enough write a run of words without any punctuation whatsoever. If punctuation was good enough for Shakespeare it has to be taken into account by all who stand on his shoulders, as we all do. A breaking up of the words into stabbing lines would have helped but this is not really poetry by any standard. Communication of ideas is the centre of all we do as writers. I think you have failed in that. Give some thought to the importance of the reader rather than yourself.