Summer Joy (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Summer Joy (Haiku)

Rating: 4.8


between the tourists
on the beach at sunset time—
drinks, chat, cheerfulness!

Wednesday, May 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: drink,holiday,joy,seaside,summer time ,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 21 May 2018

Lovely senryu. A summer joy captured well in a few lines.10

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Kostas Lagos 20 May 2018

Summer is here! Great senryu!

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

A perfect depiction of mirth among tourists at a beach at sunset. Nice senryu.

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Joy is here captured like a beautiful sunset!

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Valsa George 17 May 2018

A beach scene has come alive with tourists enjoying their holiday watching the sunset, eating, drinking and merry making, thus giving relief to their frayed nerves. Beautiful Senryu!

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