Summit And Gravity Poem by Octavio Paz

Summit And Gravity

Rating: 3.1


There's a motionless tree
And another one coming forward
A river of trees
Hits my chest
The green surge
Is good fortune
You are dressed in red
You are
The seal of the scorched year
The carnal firebrand
The star fruit
In you like sun
The hour rests
Above an abyss of clarities
The height is clouded by birds
Their beaks construct the night
Their wings carry the day
Planted in the crest of light
Between firmness and vertigo
You are
Transparent balance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2019

the solar system summit to gravity apex to roots sun to ocean light to water evaporation circling, recycling the life to balance transparently!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2019

We like sunlight and sun both. This poem is definitely very interesting and lovely. A nice poem of the day is chosen.10

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Dominic Windram 03 December 2019

This innovative free verse poem abounds with colourful, wild, surrealistic imagery courtesy of Octavio Paz...it's a 10 from me!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2019

River of trees! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Harley White 03 December 2019

Great images... wonderful poem...

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2019

Their wings carry the day Planted in the crest of light Between firmness and vertigo You are Transparent balance. very poetic.

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