From the womb of the night
Comes out a sun, glowing bright
The sky is his cradle,
A place to grow and dwell.
And white clouds are his playmates
Yet a longing, for someone he waits
The lone lover continues to blaze in sorrow;
Long enough, not knowing what will follow.
Then the demure moon finally arrives
And brazen sun softly sparkles and shines
Sun and moon in their own galaxy of love
Teaching us truth of life from high above
Love is timeless, everlasting and eternal
An essence of existence that is universal
Deep and passionately crafted is this beautiful poem of yours. Your diction is a complete delight.
A wonderful and unique love poem. It captures the eternality of love. Well executed write.
It's a lovely poem Bipasa! My favorite lines: Sun and moon in their own galaxy of love/Teaching us truth of life from high above....Your are writing extremely well. I admire the way you have streamlined things through a systematic flow and use of suitable rhyming words! We would love to see more such poems in days ahead! bless you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes true love is unconstitutional, timeless and eternal. A sweet poem. Top score.