Sun And Moon - A Celestial Love Story Poem by Bipasha Dutt

Sun And Moon - A Celestial Love Story

Rating: 5.0


From the womb of the night
Comes out a sun, glowing bright

The sky is his cradle,
A place to grow and dwell.

And white clouds are his playmates
Yet a longing, for someone he waits

The lone lover continues to blaze in sorrow;
Long enough, not knowing what will follow.

Then the demure moon finally arrives
And brazen sun softly sparkles and shines

Sun and moon in their own galaxy of love
Teaching us truth of life from high above

Love is timeless, everlasting and eternal
An essence of existence that is universal

Tuesday, February 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 June 2022

Yes true love is unconstitutional, timeless and eternal. A sweet poem. Top score.

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Chinedu Dike 23 August 2020

Deep and passionately crafted is this beautiful poem of yours. Your diction is a complete delight.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 February 2018

A wonderful and unique love poem. It captures the eternality of love. Well executed write.

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Bipasha D 21 February 2018

Thank you so much for your kind words

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 February 2018

It's a lovely poem Bipasa! My favorite lines: Sun and moon in their own galaxy of love/Teaching us truth of life from high above....Your are writing extremely well. I admire the way you have streamlined things through a systematic flow and use of suitable rhyming words! We would love to see more such poems in days ahead! bless you

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Bipasha D 14 February 2018

Thanks a lot for such kind words

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