Paper Boats (Haiku) Poem by Bipasha Dutt

Paper Boats (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0

tiny paper boats
bring back childhood memory
rain patters outside

Thursday, February 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,rain
Dr Dillip K Swain 10 February 2018

The memory of happy childhood is deeply reflected through this beautiful Haiku....This reminds me R. N. Tagore's Paper Boat....My boat will be floating on and on and it will reach some strange land......these types of poetic imagination comes to a poet with pattering of rain! Beautiful.....10

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Bipasha D 10 February 2018

Thank you for such a positive remark

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Nour Mattar 12 February 2018

i love the mood created in this poem and how deep those three lines are.

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Bipasha D 13 February 2018

Thank you for your appreciation

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 February 2018

A great succinct write with compelling imagery. It brings wonderful childhood memories.10

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Suresh Kumar Ek 21 September 2020

Memory of floating boats is childhood

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Bri Edwards 14 September 2019

well, it's nice someone knows about the 'proper syllable counts' of a Haiku! i guess one could [you DID] use " patters" for rain, especially if it hits a hard surface, like a tin roof. but i'd opt for " splatters" . hey! there is a very tiny bug/insect? crawling over my PC monitor, over my comment area. how DARE it! ! ? bri :)

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Superb! ! ! ! Paper boat and childhood memories are inseparable.10/10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 May 2018

A beautiful Haiku dear Bipasha! I derive a great pleasure each time I read it!

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 May 2018

nostalgic and exclusive great 10+++

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