Paper Boats (Haiku) Poem by Bipasha Dutt

The memory of happy childhood is deeply reflected through this beautiful Haiku....This reminds me R. N. Tagore's Paper Boat....My boat will be floating on and on and it will reach some strange land......these types of poetic imagination comes to a poet with pattering of rain! Beautiful.....10

i love the mood created in this poem and how deep those three lines are.

A great succinct write with compelling imagery. It brings wonderful childhood memories.10

Memory of floating boats is childhood

well, it's nice someone knows about the 'proper syllable counts' of a Haiku! i guess one could [you DID] use " patters" for rain, especially if it hits a hard surface, like a tin roof. but i'd opt for " splatters" . hey! there is a very tiny bug/insect? crawling over my PC monitor, over my comment area. how DARE it! ! ? bri :)

Superb! ! ! ! Paper boat and childhood memories are inseparable.10/10

A beautiful Haiku dear Bipasha! I derive a great pleasure each time I read it!

nostalgic and exclusive great 10+++