Sun And Planet - Poem by pratik rajani

fab! ! ! Beautifully woven words! ! (Report)Reply

It's a beautiful poem of love and attachment..nice to read for the second time..10
Rini (Report)Reply

Rich flow of thoughts in good rendition of words. Beautiful and very passionate love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart. Lovely work of art. Thanks for sharing Pratik. (Report)Reply

You have given a day.You have given the way.Nice lines.Thanks for sharing.1o (Report)Reply

Pratik Rajani(10/26/2017 10:19:00 AM)

thanks for big 10

pratik, in this piece as in your water poem, you show good poetic instincts. in both you use images that are familiar and, therefore, accessible. which reminds me of hafez the great sufi mystic, one of my favorite poets, whom i know only through the english renderings of daniel ladinsky. -glen (Report)Reply

If only we could love the planet which sustains us instead of destroying all that she has given.
Just like the planets all life is interdependent, a fact we refuse to heed. (Report)Reply

well written nice keep it up blessings and best wishes (Report)Reply

Dear Pratik, you suggested i read this poem n i did..i like this poem..given me a good start for the day.
I am sure why didn't God who created everything place the Sun nearer to Earth..hah! we'l be burnt and everything.
God is Great! I believe God. (Report)Reply

Yes. A humbling down of man. He cannot get away from God who is love. Or it could be a woman. Whatever attracts us will be the way of survival. Or undoing. Be careful, my friend, of this primeval force who is woman. (Report)Reply

we all look but see things differently oh how lucky we are my friend for the world would be a bore keep writing and open the worlds eyes (Report)Reply

I'd be fine with the love of God being gravity
That's the best theory yet

thoughtful, keen words
thanks! (Report)Reply

I call it love, love and love, the only truth, go on.. (Report)Reply

A lovely love poem, Pratik. I like your earth and sun metaphor. I remember writing something similar when I was about your age. (Report)Reply

Welcome to Poem Hunter dot come dear Pratik. It is a beautiful poem on love through Sun and Planet having stunning expression. Let it be quoted...

You have hold me with endless force from countless time.
People call it gravity.
I call it love.

Yes, My love

You are the Sun,
And i am Planet.

Many thanks dear Pratik, keep the ball rolling. Full Vote. (Report)Reply

Pratik Rajani(9/13/2017 4:55:00 AM)

thank you sir.....

The way of the day! With the muse of Gravity! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

Pratik Rajani(9/9/2017 1:03:00 AM)

pleasure is all my dear edward

Very simple and meaningful poem to read! Keep it up! (Report)Reply

Pratik Rajani(9/8/2017 10:49:00 AM)

Thank you Rameshjii...

A poem about love that keeps on going on. Simple penning of heartfelt love. (Report)Reply

Pratik Rajani(9/8/2017 3:34:00 AM)

thank you so much sarah...

Superb poem pratik..
You are the reason
Why I have seasons
People call it gravity
I call it love... I liked the flow and the metaphor used..10 (Report)Reply

Pratik Rajani(9/8/2017 3:33:00 AM)

thanks for big 10...
Rini...

She holds you with the gravity of her love. Pratik, this is very heatfelt and nicely written poem about love. (Report)Reply

Pratik Rajani(9/5/2017 12:06:00 PM)

thank you captain..! !

Pratik Rajani(9/5/2017 11:47:00 AM)

Thank you captain.

Nice poem of love, you may like to buy my book avaliable on Amazon, A Silver Lining (Report)Reply

Pratik Rajani(9/5/2017 12:05:00 PM)

thanks a lot sarah and surely i will look at silver lining.

Pratik Rajani(9/5/2017 11:46:00 AM)

Thanka a lot sarah. I will surely take a look at silver lining.