Sun Is Setting Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA

Sun Is Setting

Rating: 5.0


Birds are chirping to return,
They are in busy to take turn.
Sun is trying to have new burn,
Evening is ready here to learn.

Cows are searching their calves,
Day lights are reduced to halves.
Finding way is nice within mind,
Evening love to all does bind.

Returning home children do tell,
Oh mother worship and ring bell.
Evening sun is calm to have burn,
All are in plan to have you turn.

Tuesday, November 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: evening,life and death,nature,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Bell 03 November 2015

Painted a nice picture to words Will read some more of your work

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Sofia Kioroglou 03 November 2015

A nice rhyming piece! Well-done!

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 27 August 2016

Wow you remind me of my home, during the sunset. Thank you for this amazing poem, drawing the beauty of the sunset. Thanks 10!

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Sanjukta Nag 05 November 2015

Festival of images. Like I'm watching a movie on sun setting. A 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2015

Nice work with the ways of nature; as the sun settles down. Thanks for sharing.

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Lorraine Colon 03 November 2015

A very nice depiction of what happens at end of day. Nature prepares to rest, and refresh itself for the new day to come. Calm and peace can be felt in your poem.

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M Asim Nehal 03 November 2015

A day's journey very well put together in artistic style....Loved it Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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