Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 147,079 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Sun Is Setting - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Birds are chirping to return,
They are in busy to take turn.
Sun is trying to have new burn,
Evening is ready here to learn.

Cows are searching their calves,
Day lights are reduced to halves.
Finding way is nice within mind,
Evening love to all does bind.

Returning home children do tell,
Oh mother worship and ring bell.
Evening sun is calm to have burn,
All are in plan to have you turn.

Topic(s) of this poem: evening, life and death, nature, spiritual


Comments about Sun Is Setting by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni (8/27/2016 6:53:00 AM)


    Wow you remind me of my home, during the sunset. Thank you for this amazing poem, drawing the beauty of the sunset. Thanks 10! (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/5/2015 6:13:00 AM)


    Festival of images. Like I'm watching a movie on sun setting. A 10. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/5/2015 5:13:00 AM)


    Nice work with the ways of nature; as the sun settles down. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (11/3/2015 10:36:00 AM)


    A very nice depiction of what happens at end of day. Nature prepares to rest, and refresh itself for the new day to come. Calm and peace can be felt in your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/3/2015 7:27:00 AM)


    A day's journey very well put together in artistic style....Loved it Sir. (Report) Reply

  • Sofia Kioroglou (11/3/2015 6:50:00 AM)


    A nice rhyming piece! Well-done! (Report) Reply

  • (11/3/2015 6:10:00 AM)


    Painted a nice picture to words
    Will read some more of your work
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 3, 2015



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