Sun Poems: 429 / 500

Sun Is Bowing Before West

Rating: 5.0

The time has tuned sweet song
East has started hiding in dark
Moon has come out early to dance
Sun is eager to donate rays too.

Moon is shining now in hope rays
Getting light from sun moon smiles
Still moon thinks to be like sun
All wait next day sun rises sure.

Sun with power walks up to west
Evening star comes to adore we see
Moon is adored by grace of sun
Light becomes veil to hold cloud.

Wow, so wonderful scene is in view
Traveling far horizon now in west
Giving promise to rise tomorrow
Sun is bowing before in honesty.

Monday, November 23, 2015
Sun Poems: 429 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: evening,life,nature
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 23 November 2015

sun rises sure, But sir, sun will not rise again, I am sure..

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Akhtar Jawad 23 November 2015

Sun always rises from the East, with it's climax reaches the west and ultimately st to rise once again from the east, it's a cycle.

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M Asim Nehal 23 November 2015

The rotation of sun is amazing.............It comes and goes each day with a purpose and you captured its movement and moments so well in your beautiful poem, Fantastic one,100+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 November 2015

Evening star comes to adore we see Moon is adored by grace of sun Light becomes veil to hold cloud. Beautiful lines. wonderful poetic sense and imagination. like your poem very much dear Poet Kumaramani. thank you. tony

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Souren Mondal 23 November 2015

There's always light at the end of the tunnel... Optimism and positive thinking are essential in our survival... But very few could learn this.. Thank you for sharing Kumarmani.. Your poems, all that I have read, have a wonderful outlook towards life, one that we all should strive to share.. Thanks..

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Pijush Biswas 23 November 2015

Every day Sun rises in the East to shine all the Earth when Moon hides somewhere from the sky.Again in night the Sun hides and Moon rises to the sky, in some pleasure moment of us. like this thanks for share

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