Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 229,267 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Sun Is Bowing Before West - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

The time has tuned sweet song
East has started hiding in dark
Moon has come out early to dance
Sun is eager to donate rays too.

Moon is shining now in hope rays
Getting light from sun moon smiles
Still moon thinks to be like sun
All wait next day sun rises sure.

Sun with power walks up to west
Evening star comes to adore we see
Moon is adored by grace of sun
Light becomes veil to hold cloud.

Wow, so wonderful scene is in view
Traveling far horizon now in west
Giving promise to rise tomorrow
Sun is bowing before in honesty.

Topic(s) of this poem: evening, life, nature

Comments about Sun Is Bowing Before West by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/23/2015 11:53:00 PM)

    Sun always rises from the East, with it's climax reaches the west and ultimately st to rise once again from the east, it's a cycle. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/23/2015 1:28:00 PM)

    The rotation of sun is amazing.............It comes and goes each day with a purpose and you captured its movement and moments so well in your beautiful poem, Fantastic one,100+++ (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (11/23/2015 10:17:00 AM)

    Evening star comes to adore we see
    Moon is adored by grace of sun
    Light becomes veil to hold cloud. Beautiful lines. wonderful poetic sense and imagination. like your poem very much dear Poet Kumaramani. thank you. tony
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  • Souren Mondal (11/23/2015 7:25:00 AM)

    There's always light at the end of the tunnel... Optimism and positive thinking are essential in our survival... But very few could learn this.. Thank you for sharing Kumarmani.. Your poems, all that I have read, have a wonderful outlook towards life, one that we all should strive to share.. Thanks.. (Report) Reply

  • Pijush Biswas (11/23/2015 7:23:00 AM)

    Every day Sun rises in the East to shine all the Earth when Moon hides somewhere from the sky.Again in night the Sun hides and Moon rises to the sky, in some pleasure moment of us.

    like this
    thanks for share
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  • Gajanan Mishra (11/23/2015 6:41:00 AM)

    sun rises sure, But sir, sun will not rise again, I am sure.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2015

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