Sunset Poem by Christa D

Sunset

Rating: 4.9


Magnificent is the moment when the sun melts in the ocean.
The bloody clouds are coming forward in harmonic motion.
The sky, enhanced by golden shades, is shining out.
This scene is taking breath away without any doubt.
It is just the fading of the day in a way more than majestic.
But this spectacle could steal tears from the least romantic.

Sunset
Tuesday, August 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2018

melting sun in the ocean, harmonic motion, golden shades, majestic, stealing tears- very poetic expressions and fine descriptions.. thank u for this great poem. tony

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Christa D 20 January 2019

Thanks for stopping by!

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 September 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Christa Rod. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Richard D Remler 11 April 2019

picture perfect. I love a good nature write. Quite vivid and creative. Loved it. tyfs

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Hans Vr 15 February 2019

Beautiful poem, smooth flowing verses, good rhyming. Sunset and sunrise, the most magical moments of the day. The colors, so true, will touch truly everyone's heart.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 November 2018

Magnificent is the moment when the sun melts in the ocean. The clouds are coming forward in harmonic motion. The sky, enhanced by golden shades, is shining out..... great description dear poetess. you h ave poetic gifts in you. develop it and write and write........ tony God bless you.

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Dave Walker 03 November 2018

A beautiful poem, like it, there's nothing like seeing a sun set.

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Christa D 20 January 2019

I'm glad that you appreciate it!

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Chinedu Dike 29 October 2018

Great lines elegantly encapsulated with lucidity and powerful images of beauty. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Christa.

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Christa D 20 January 2019

Thanks a lot! ! !

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