Sunset Lovers Poem by me poet yeps poet

Sunset Lovers

Rating: 5.0


Another sunset another sunrise
the sun as it sets simply says....
give others a chance....
as in the mid of night
you romance.....
as you dance and prance...
let others warm up too
it’s like another cold world....
hope all this knew...


as there is only one sun
you can heat up
in a modern environment
many need the sun more...
as poverty is now on shore..


so the sun smiles...
at the passersby
as others smile
to welcome the tearing
Okay De-virginising of mist...
ere the dawn
of a freshly awakening morn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2018

so the sun smiles... at the passersby as others smile to welcome the tearing Okay De-virginising of mist... ere the dawn of a freshly awakening morn.........so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Elena Sandu 13 February 2018

Awesome sharing, thank you! so the sun smiles... at the passersby as others smile Can't wait for the spring to come, miss dancing with the rising sun

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 September 2018

thanks belated I just passed by

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2017

As poverty is now on shore! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 September 2017

kindness and greatness lie side by side Louis E K...poet the best thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 August 2017

you romance..... as you dance and prance...De-virginising of mist... ere the dawn of a freshly awakening morn.... word combinations are wonderful bringing in new thoughts and original.. in your way of writing.. thank you dear poet.. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 September 2017

kindness doctor such lovely words coming from u

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