Sunset Surrenderings Poem by Panagiota Romios

Sunset Surrenderings

Rating: 5.0


When the sun goes down
we shiver, it's cold!
Stop complaining, you look so old!
Inside, don a warm sweater.
Ah, yes! So much better!
Now light the fireplace!
Warm my chilled  hands.
My lips.
Glow!


November 16,2019

Saturday, November 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,sunset,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 17 November 2019

Nice poem, Panagiota! The reason I look old is because I AM old!

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Panagiota Romios 17 November 2019

Hi Kim...ok... Thank you.....Panagiota

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Panagiota Romios 17 November 2019

Ok, I get it! Thanks, Kim. Panagiota

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Kostas Lagos 16 November 2019

Lovely poem Panagiota!

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Panagiota Romios. 16 November 2019

You have such a good heart! Thank you, Kostas.

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C F 16 November 2019

A very graceful write about sunset and growing old, a nostalgic reminder of when as youths we dared the cold. But despite all the years, you still find love by your fireside.10+

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Panagiota Romios 16 November 2019

How poetic a comment....indeed love is still there...though the years have gone. Many thanks for the 10 rating. Be happy today. Panagiota

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