Supposed To Be Quiet Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Supposed To Be Quiet

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Supposed to be quiet


Ordinary and gentlemen people are supposed to be quiet
It is more or so in case of shy poets
They may try to extract any thought that may try to emerge
What else can be attributed for the self to purge?

What poor poet expects from fellow brethrens?
When her mind is occupied with devotion and no concerns?
What all ideas may be invading his mind?
Single mind to be concentrated and find

Long drawn battle for conceptual acceptance
Is this task not daunting and challenging at once?
He is for peace and stability among people
Life once again to breathe without any troubles

How many thoughts to be discarded?
How many views to be reviewed and rewarded?
So much struggle in mind for beautiful presentation
Not for any appreciation or getting the citation

The flowers boom in beautiful garden
They gain full blossom at maturity even
But how many disappear even at the down of the day?
Who hold their fingers in hand and show the way?

So many poets beat their drum in wilderness
Present their fine creations and surface
Many may be just dreaming about bright sun
What tragically remains in their luck to run?

No one takes note their sad demise
How many pledges were made with promises?
They all are found now useless and hollow
What else is left for them than to lie low?

Not all can reach to great height
Unfortunates may even meet bad fate
Their dreams will be shattered once for all
World may watch their nose dive and fall

Another bright star may be lost
It will not at somebody’s cost
Some good heart may breathe last time
Where do we think or care any times?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Roberts 21 September 2011

Another bright star may be lost It will not at somebody’s cost i love this part reminds me of my favorite saying a diamond in the rough shines brightly beneath the moon light. and what that means is true we got the potential but we still need a little aid be all we can be so shine star shine

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Romeo Della Valle 21 September 2011

Bravo! This is powerful and truthful write which I can identify with 100% since, we poets feel betrayed around people who lack of a creative imagination! They do not understand our language (Poetry) unaware that Poetry is the Mirror of the World and we are just a reflection pasted in that mirror! These people are in a world of their own! They are victims of their own ignorance! 10+++ Wish you and family the best and keep inspiring the Poetry World with more of your thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2011

Re: Supposed to be quiet (Score: 1) by alana on Wednesday, September 21,2011 (07: 06: 01) very nice words, lot of depth to them Reply to This | Parent | Delete

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2011

Another bright star may be lost It will not at somebody’s cost Some good heart may breathe last time Where do we think or care any times?

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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