Who would have thought that I deserved a bit of heaven?
The angels must be smiling at what had just happened.
My heart is thrilled at the thought of your existence;
The butterflies in my stomach are fluttering without pretense.
I'm doing things out of the ordinary,
My feelings are quite in quandary.
You seem to hold a key to a treasure in my life,
For, things are unlocking these past few days and nights.
Whatever it is that binds us together,
I surely feel so much better.
So here's one tiny bit of advice,
Please hang in there for the rest of my life.
A very good poem. And the first line sounds as a classic aphorism.
Still lovin and gettin stronger n stronger.Good ridden poem Rage! !
this was so lovely to read it brought back a memory of how a chance meeting can turn your whole perspective on life on it's head, over and it heals. Who would have thought it possible? God only knows, smiling at you, TAi
surely you are falling.... very hearfelt write..written from heart to touch one's heart... .full of hope and love.... very humble...your thoughts are superb wonderful words, beautifully crafted to form into a beautiful poem your piece clearly pictures a man longing for her love... 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
As if I am reading a diary or a love letter...so heartfelt penned vividly that your thoughts are so expressive....10