jerry hughes

Veteran Poet - 1,344 Points (January 4,1931 / a citizen of the world)

Surgical La La Land - Poem by jerry hughes

A calming, professional voice will say:
'This'll relax you.' followed by a prick -
in the arm that is.
It's the precursor to surgical la la land
I'll know nothing about it until -
(I've been there before)
waking up in Intensive Care with tubes
of all sorts connected, doing all sorts of
recovering things.
As the fog lifts and my eyes open I'll
realise I'm alive, even if I feel, and I will,
like shyte.


Comments about Surgical La La Land by jerry hughes

  • Ernestine Northover (4/11/2008 8:56:00 AM)


    I'm not sure they allow 'shyte' in hospitals Jerry, because it is unhygienic, so you'll have to find something else to feel like. Ha! How about a strong glass of brandy. Box of chocolates. Grapes. Dishy nurse.21 again.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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  • (4/11/2008 6:08:00 AM)


    Hang tough my friend, hang tough. (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 10:03:00 PM)


    But, and a BIG but Jez, it won't be the same shyte you're feelin' now mate! I'm glad you mentioned where the prick was intended... G'Luck mate, Ivan (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 8:45:00 PM)


    Oh dear, I do hope those 'recovering things' don't include putting your hands up the IC nurses' skirts... tsk tsk. love Nurse Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2008


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