Surrender Poem by Sonya Florentino

Surrender

Rating: 5.0


Cut me loose
From these ropes
I'm not running anymore

Pull me out
Of this hole
I'm not hiding anymore

Ask me to
Bare it all
Deepest reaches of my soul

Take me now
Set me free
I am armed and ready

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 07 October 2009

This is music from the soul trying to grow itself some wings..that's why it's so beautiful and haunting..(smile)

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Lillian Thomas 10 July 2009

you must have written a lot of song lyrics. I cannot write even one half plausible one; and these roll out like falling off a log for you! I hear music, I hear a back beat, I just know some of these are meant to be sung!

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Izik Alcox 07 December 2008

short simple and powerful, great write

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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