Sweat. Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

Sweat.



Oh its sweating,
may be due to working hard,
But hardwork always leads to smart work.
Oh its sweats,
Will it be due to fever! ,
But fever is due to weakness on the body.
Could it be, due to heat!
Where the heat may lead to temper.
An sweat may be due to fear,
Where strong and boldness require's.
The bad smell of sweating hurts others,
But it is a moisture from pores of the skin,

SWEATING MAY BE, SOMETIMES GOOD, SOMETIMES BAD TO HEALTH.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 10 October 2019

Well penned. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 April 2017

Strong and boldness! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 April 2017

Hello Ram, A funny poem on sweat! It is sweat - not - an sweat. It is fever - not - fewer! Please correct it, Ram! Though sweat may have bad odour, yet, it is sweat of hard labour that keeps man healthy.! I gather that it must be extremely humid and hot in Coimbatore now. :)

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