Sweet he is, a great story teller
Sweet words that keep you attentive
Loving words that keep your heart glowing
How he makes you feel so special
Ooh sweet poison of mine!
How he says his heart desires you
How he intrigues you with his actions
He is a great soap opera actor
He makes you feel like his only queen
Ooh sweet poison of mine!
King of queens he is
He desires all women he can
The world of women is too big for him
He can not make a choice
Ooh sweet poison of mine!
You make me feel special for a moment
You make many others feel the same
King of many queens who is your queen
How you play with my emotions and hurt my feelings
Ooh sweet poison of mine!
Sweet poison of mine, make a choice.
it is a masterpiece, thought evoking, every line is wonderful, bursting with creativity
definately he needs to make a choice. This is just awesome creativity
The world of women is too big for him He can not make a choice Ooh sweet poison of mine! oh how you play with my emotions and my life..... swee poison...... infatuation, attractions, the so called love all experiences of the young days....... very well portrayed. thank u. tony
Sweet poison... Love deception. Affectation juxtaposed with affection. Nicely written.
I love this poem. Great work ,Linet. We relate because we all have or have had our very own sweet poison. Sweet Poison of mine....
Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
This poem shows some strange behavior of a lover-thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love it.... keep it up