Sweet Slumber Poem by Tammy Hendrix

Sweet Slumber

Rating: 5.0


I woke to the twining of fingers
snaking beneath warm blankets
following the arching of my leg
risen slightly
gliding curves
dividing valleys
in search of rivers.
warm breezes burrow
kissing through locks of autumn
whispering I love you
as we lay
bodies pressed and curled
twined and penetrating
drifting off together
I think
how much I love when you come home late.

Thursday, September 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 28 September 2016

Quietly sensuous. Compelling in its soft, drowsy romance. Very nicely done. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

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Hazel Durham 24 September 2016

Stunningly beautiful Tammy, the sensual curve of your captivating words capture the intimacy of Sweet Slumber the moves of love portrayed with a personal, moving appeal!

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Tammy Hendrix 24 September 2016

Nice to meet you Hazel. Thank you so much for your kind words. I was feeling quite sensuous when I wrote it. ;)

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Akhtar Jawad 20 September 2016

The poetess has described a lovely and passionate moment in her amazing style, it wasn't an easy job to create beauty in such a difficult description but Tammy Hendrix has nicely managed it.

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Tammy Hendrix 20 September 2016

Thank you for reading and for the in-depth wonderful review. I really appreciate it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2016

Gliding curves of life. Nice work.

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Tammy Hendrix 20 September 2016

Thank you for you kind words.

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Full of feelings and loaded with a love that is rich in romance that runs like a river that is pregnant with passion. Well done!

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Tammy Hendrix 16 September 2016

Nice to meet you, Mr. Simon. Romance is such a beautiful thing. pregnant with passion I like that. Thank you so much. :)

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