Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 439,473 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Symbol Of - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

First love
If really believe
Is really puzzling and exciting
Keeps on reminding

This was not possible
For all people
To have choice of their mind
I could easily find

She was not at all deceptive
But innocent and receptive
Eyes clearly reminding me of honesty
Well spoken girl and impressive already

I get real smell
That reveals
Of her presence
Symbol of love’s essence

I did not fell on ground
But certainly found
Her influence to be heart touching
That I was so far searching

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2015 11:15:00 PM)


    Lovely as first loves should be, innocent and remembered with a smile! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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  • Mantu Mahakul (3/22/2015 9:34:00 PM)


    First love is expression and perfection. Wonderful poem shared really. Nicely drafted. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2015 9:21:00 PM)


    Charlotte Calabro likes this.

    Charlotte Calabro Love the flow Hasmukh Mehta
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2015 8:27:00 PM)


    First love
    If really believe
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 22, 2015



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