how much of you is
kissed, loved, tasted, coveted
a boy and his shake
your syrup lips, sugar toes
bookend the sweetest journeys
It is beautiful poem on valentines day having nice diction.........your syrup lips, sugar toes bookend the sweetest journeys. Thanks for sharing.10
It might not be Valentines but the sentiments are fresh as peppermints...I'll get my coat. But really Lovely work Mr. Lemon, it really does work on different levels, there is the innocuous aspect of a simple sweet, and there is the more tangible substance of a deep love, the succulent delight of feeling a loved once lips, sweet as Hershey's kisses. Ravishingly delightful.
A kiss described by a lovely poem in his own style, a different poem on the valentines day.
A lovely warm Valentines poem that makes one feel the person spoken of is loved very much.10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This short poem combines the sweetness of a passionate kiss from a loved one and the gentleness of an angel like kiss by a child with sugary lips and tender toes. Beautiful!
Thank you so much, Valsa. Depending on the day, I find myself favouring one interpretation to the other. Thank you so much.