Tamarind Poem by M.J. Lemon

Tamarind

Rating: 5.0


All my expectations plumb
the fallow heart and succumb
to that resignation that starts
to beat and hum and then charts
an exit, a surrender, a retreat.
I have stood on the uneven hill
I listened to the raven shrill
All my childish revelations
alight upon stony frustrations
I thought I knew, I thought I knew
all about what is good and true.

I plunge my hand into the earth
And tell myself to await rebirth
But single moments cascade
and in no time a decade
whispers then roars a tirade
Against what this wayward soul paid
the scent, the tamarind, so afraid
To burn to cleanse all desire
urges me to let transpire...
Time for an end to this lament
Or the rains will spew their torment
I pull my hand from the gasping ground
What rests what sleeps may never be found.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 13 May 2023

Wow! The reader can really feel the full emotional impact of this profound poem. Defying death...so powerfully and brilliantly written. Amazing, my friend!

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M.J. Lemon 26 November 2023

Very much appreciated, Richard. Thanks so much.

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Nabakishore Dash 24 June 2022

an excellent write with good rhymes and full of insight dear poet MJ Lemon.

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M.J. Lemon 26 November 2023

Thank you, Nabakishore. Thanks for reading.

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Simone Inez Harriman 04 April 2018

WOW your poem grabbed me from the start: “All my expectations plumb the fallow heart and succumb to that resignation that starts to beat and hum and then charts an exit, a surrender, a retreat.” I just realised when I went back to copy another few lines I liked that I just love the whole poem. Straight to my favourites and a resounding 10++++

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Mj Lemon 04 April 2018

Simone, thank you so very much. I am grateful to hear that you had such a positive reaction.

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Terry Craddock 21 January 2017

'I plunge my hand into the earth And tell myself to await rebirth' the soil holds the potential for vast life species choices, definitely a germinating touch here.

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M.J. Lemon 26 November 2023

A belated Thank You, Terry.

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Sarah Mkhonza 10 December 2016

I like to use this word as my never never land. I enjoyed this poem and learnt a lot from it.

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Mj Lemon 12 December 2016

Sarah, thanks again. Thanks so much.

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