Tagaytay Mornings Poem by Eddie Roa

Tagaytay Mornings

Rating: 5.0


Bare feet on glistening wet grass
A chorus of leaves rustling, humming
Wake my soul from its stupor

Black Labradors howling protest
Over the bread man’s honking horn
Stir my listless heart

Snails hurrying to greet the worms
Pacing through slithery trails
Unravel my knotty sinews

Zesty sparrows collecting by the gazebo
Quarreling over seeds in a frenzy
Remind me of God’s grace

Frogs and turtles chatting by the pond
Placid water disturbed by their noise
Tell me that silence is a virtue

Hungry blue birds avidly watching
Over tiny ripples made by wee fish
Warn me of the day’s perils

Carillon ringing its morning tidings
Clangor against brassy chapel bells
Arouse my lust for life

Evergreen giants brushing off
Wet mist from heavy shoulders
Teach me tolerance and forgiveness

Spectacles, tableaux, and pageants
Greet the dawning of each day,
Mornings God has made, rejoice and be glad

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 04 February 2009

So beautiful Sir...a very nice tribute to the city of Tagaytay...I love this place so much it reminded me of too much sweet memories.......Taal Vista, picnick grove, the fruits, resto's, so much things to say....Lovely...10+++

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Chitra - 04 February 2009

wonderful..vivid imagery..so much to learn from the natural elements around us.

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Lynda Robson 05 February 2009

Thank you for this lovely descriptive write, I felt I was there with you in Tagaytay 10 Lynda xx

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Kite Remedy 05 February 2009

very calming and ennobling works you've written, it must have been an inspirational morning for you..

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Jester's P 09 February 2009

tagaytay is actualy one of the places in the philippines that i want to visit...soon. you know what your poem provided me a glims of beauty that the place get hold with. indeed your poem symbolizes the human tendecy to see the face of reality in different- unique ways...

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Gil Gregorio 08 February 2009

You have a beuatiful heart that soothes mine... great poetry gender. Different...clear but buggling...hhhehehe

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 February 2009

Melding nature with down to earth realities of life in poetry is really a great difficult tast. You are a real master of great class, great apt vocabulary.....Hats off

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Indira Babbellapati 07 February 2009

the early mornignorchestra...so very soul-filling!

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Ency Bearis 05 February 2009

I can imagine the tranquil and cool morning with nice scenic view of Taal Volcano..ah.. a nice jogging area..stretching and burning out the cholesterol..a very nice descriptive write..lovely indeed...10

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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