Bare feet on glistening wet grass
A chorus of leaves rustling, humming
Wake my soul from its stupor
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You have a beuatiful heart that soothes mine... great poetry gender. Different...clear but buggling...hhhehehe
Melding nature with down to earth realities of life in poetry is really a great difficult tast. You are a real master of great class, great apt vocabulary.....Hats off
I can imagine the tranquil and cool morning with nice scenic view of Taal Volcano..ah.. a nice jogging area..stretching and burning out the cholesterol..a very nice descriptive write..lovely indeed...10
very calming and ennobling works you've written, it must have been an inspirational morning for you..
Thank you for this lovely descriptive write, I felt I was there with you in Tagaytay 10 Lynda xx
wonderful..vivid imagery..so much to learn from the natural elements around us.
So beautiful Sir...a very nice tribute to the city of Tagaytay...I love this place so much it reminded me of too much sweet memories.......Taal Vista, picnick grove, the fruits, resto's, so much things to say....Lovely...10+++
tagaytay is actualy one of the places in the philippines that i want to visit...soon. you know what your poem provided me a glims of beauty that the place get hold with. indeed your poem symbolizes the human tendecy to see the face of reality in different- unique ways...