Take Me Away To A Lovely Place Poem by Reema Kawatra

Take Me Away To A Lovely Place

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Take me away to a lovely place,
where the skies are dark and blue,
stars shining bright in the dark of night;
Take me away to a lovely place.

The blooms of jasmine on the hedges,
thick forest foliage on the edges,
moonlight glistering in the ravine,
silhouette of the mighty mountains gleam;
Take me away to a lovely place.

Waterfall cascades from atop the hill,
tender blades of grass woven in twill,
I stand barefoot, my soul is bare,
in rapt attention I stare,
Take me away to a lovely place.

A lonesome fowl separated from the brood,
wanders aimlessly and hoots,
determined to find his way,
in the thickest of woods, till the break of day,
I want to leave never,
stay here forever;
Take me away to a lovely place.

Take Me Away To A Lovely Place
Thursday, March 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 24 March 2019

I do love well-done repetition- -it carries atmosphere, a rhythm of its own. a roundness to the poem. And I enjoyed the scenery in this journey. Beautiful write! !

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Susan Williams 24 March 2019

I do love well-done repetition- -it carries atmosphere, a rhythm of its own. a roundness to the poem. And I enjoyed the scenery in this journey

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Dr Ratan Bhattacharjee 15 March 2019

One of the most romantic poems on love and nature. Congrats Reema . Beautiful start

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Chinedu Dike 14 March 2019

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Reema.

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C F 14 March 2019

Great poem of longing, vivid imagery, my favorite from 4 poems you posted so far. Thank you for sharing.

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Reema Kawatra 14 March 2019

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem... this is the first comment for my poem on this forum and means a lot to me....

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