Take Risks And Adventure Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Take Risks And Adventure

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Why are you bruised like that?

'Following you has not been easy.
I thought it would be a breeze,
When given 'you' as an assignment.
But you make unannounced twists and turns.'

And all this time I thought you wanted to be my shadow?
With a desire to remain attached like a moth is to a flame.

Either way...
You should have said something!
I would have told you,
The ride is not a smooth one at all.
I take risks and adventure!
You should have been here to witness,
My earlier injuries.
I had my eyes closed when they happened.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 18 May 2010

The ride is not a smooth one at all. Yes Poet, our passion always wants a moth to fire for its smoothness and natural longings. But cruelty of life sometimes like the burns which we don't want to be witnessed, yet fire spreads to make us homeless without prior indication or information. So no chance of risk and adventure play any part there, simply happenings draw a big zero on the canvass. Write more Poet, LIVE LONG Regards, 10++ Apoet Bangla

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