Take The Pledge Here Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Take The Pledge Here

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Take the pledge
Monday,27th August 2018

Any forum
which maintains the decorum
always excels in the filed
as writers/poets held them together

it has a tendency to go upward
and not look backward
this is how motivational strips does
the credit too goes to all of us and admins

it is the space
that is important for all of us
I will write three
and comment free

this shall bring us close
and repose
the trust in each other
and always inspire

let it grow in the banyan tree
and allow free
wring sans any strings
that shall bring uniformity

let us take the pledge
and edge out any differences
if ever it takes the place
we shall value the choice

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

Take The Pledge Here
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2018

A great message yielding poem! However, two more points should be added....let us not create faction and groups! let us appreciate works irrespective of persons....let us not underestimate any one! (10)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2018

Shiju H. PallithazhethShiju H. and 13 others manage the membership, moderators, settings, and posts for Motivational Strips. Brilliant! 馃憦馃憣鉁嶏笍猸愶笍鉂わ笍 1 Manage Like 路 Reply 路 16m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2018

welcome shiju h 1 Manage Like 路 Reply 路 1m 路 Edited

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2018

Absolutely You are doing great by always encouraging others posts... shieju h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2018

let us take the pledge and edge out any differences if ever it takes the place we shall value the choice Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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