Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 451,133 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Takes Directly - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Takes directly

I stare
But fail to dare
I try to touch
But can't reach

It is such stage
That comes of an age
It looks mysterious
But makes me no jealous

I open the pages of past
Try to view one by one and very fast
I wonder about my action
Gently speak in favor with no reaction

Why did I fail in each attempt?
I shall not prompt
Any answer
But smilingly shiver

It bursts me into happiness
With reddishness on face
I don't know what reminds me often
But it takes me directly to living heaven

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/25/2015 8:18:00 PM)


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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/25/2015 7:43:00 PM)


    I stare
    But fail to dare
    I try to touch
    But can't reach...what an amazing expression really shared with this new vision. This is very interesting to have such poem living with mind in heaven.10
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/25/2015 7:37:00 PM)


    It bursts me into happiness
    With reddishness on face
    I don't know what reminds me often
    But it takes me directly to living heaven
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 25, 2015



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