Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Taking Her Consent - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

“Will you love me” I posed a question
“No, not at all” I do not like its mention even
“How did u dare to ask it to me” she blasted
I lost the nerve and felt the strength really exhausted

First of all I had no intention of directly taking her consent
As every time she will come silently and not comment
This gave me some hope and I thought it was all clear
I too was not prepared for any negative reply with so much fear

I failed to understand the female psychology
They are known as very cooperative and raise no bogey
They may express everything but ultimately shy
You will not gather the courage to ask for it with why

I had full faith in her and got the same impression
She will never go for out right confession
She will test my patience and logic behind
I had yet to prove my commitment for her to find

Why is it so shaky that at first it has to be refused?
Then escape with the excuse that you are confused
I did not think over such defense in advance
As I was impatient to test it at once

I have some strong belief with real feeling
I do not believe in forceful imposition or stealing
It must be mutually agreed upon as holy gift
At no stage it must be marred by altercation or rift

I always wished it to be shared unconditionally
As love was forthcoming unintentionally
It had its own origin with strong attachment
I feared from within for its detachment

I have understood properly her unspoken words
It had consent from heart and forced me to look forward
She was really not unwilling but little hesitant
As the love had mushroomed not gradually but instant

I cooled her down and with little apologetic gesture
She too was frightened with unsecured future
She thought it may bring unwanted collapse
That may totally be contributed on her lapses

She realized it lately and conveyed a beautiful smile
This all happened in quick succession for a while
I too was taken a back for quick approval
I thought it is really time for spring’s arrival

I welcomed from heart her swift change over
It was well calculated and imagined cover
I was about to loose balance visibly in mind
As she had proved through considerate and very kind


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/26/2011 7:34:00 AM)


    I welcomed from heart her swift change over
    It was well calculated and imagined cover
    I was about to loose balance visibly in mind
    As she had proved through considerate and very kind
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 19, 2011


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